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Lost Souls Flea Market
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Lost Souls Flea Market |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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oh, be quiet my torn asunder don't crawl from my dreadful I'll ask not much of your buffet all those goodies lined up like pies a severed heart put back together superglued with hope renewed I think the unthinkable quest will be cohesive to my shady ©July 25, 2015 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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J.J.thomas Member Posts 84 |
A bit difficult for me to understand... it sounds like an internal battle of sorts though... |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Eh . . . I do wander out there a bit sometimes . . . J.J. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I love it when you wander about among the shades of gray mists and metaphors and find something beneath your feet besides mean streets and melancholy. ~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks, Lori, always good to see you . . . Ah, those mean streets, I hear ya . . . ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
asunder...dreadful...shady---I'm intrigued by your unabashed use of these words turning them into Nouns, giving them a persona of their own...how dreadful that you have placed my shady self tearing me asunder...pardon me for taking them into some fanciful flights. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hah! I love what you did "or taking them into some fanciful flights." I loved it. Thank you jjote . . . ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
enjoyed...james |
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