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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada 
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Bony tree branches thrust at the blanket of stars sky yields to darkness. Last autumn leaves drift rafting the river current cavorting with wind. Storm sweeps fiercely down cavalry charge of thunder gusting rain hurls grits. @jjote 0829/2015 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ahhh . . . dark haiku's are right up my alley, jjote. Especially liked the first one, but they all connected fantastically! ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
I'm not really sure I'm doing this right, this form has some "rules" I can't seem to catch. But thanks for the read. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You are doing them 5-7-5 and that is the correct way . . . Haiku's are about nature and senryu's 5-7-5 are about everything else . . . ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
Thanks Jerry, I keep fprgetting the difference. |
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