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late Summer to Autumn Zenoids |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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On this cicada-summer night we are all guests of the moon tall and stately secret wisdom of the ages oak forest 'endless' mountains dancing in and out of the Autumn mist Love has left now all roads lead to the past October morning clouds behind clouds in an endless sky Summer dawn the sheen of dew on tall grasses Summer midnight a blue moon swims this lake of dreams --- b. e. adams (8/2015) |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Like the syllable count throughout these segments of the whole poem. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
for me ... standard/traditional (5/7/5) Haiku syllables is generally too limiting. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
very nice...james |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thanks JM ! I've generally found the short Zen poetry harder to write well than the long poems, etc. |
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