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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2015-08-08 12:02 PM


    The Emblem of Eternity  

As light vanishes into light
   and shadows into night,
all other things may come
    to naught,
yet you took hold of a place in
    my heart
that no one else could ever reach;
and there Love will remain
the emblem of eternity.
In the beautiful silence of
every dream its very face, form,
and spirit ... shall always be you!

                   --- b. e. adams (8/8/2015)


© Copyright 2015 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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1 posted 2015-08-08 09:39 AM


Beautifully rendered, Bruce. Our memories, even the bad ones, are what sustains us during the cold, lonely days when we are into solitude thinking.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 2015-08-08 09:56 AM


Thanks, JP !

... Today was actually the birthday of one of those "lost loves" ...

JerryPat2
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3 posted 2015-08-08 11:48 AM


Ahhh . . . Don't guess she was close enough for you to give her a big hug and a Happy Birthday greeting.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

secondhanddreampoet
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4 posted 2015-08-08 01:08 PM


nope ... she's in British Columbia ... and I'm now 'the past' ...
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2015-08-08 06:45 PM


nice to read...james
secondhanddreampoet
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6 posted 2015-08-08 07:22 PM


Thanks JM !
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7 posted 2015-08-08 09:57 PM


Sad Bruce but as Jerry said we all live on  with memories.Maybe "She" is remembering you as in her past.best to you, JO
Marchmadness
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8 posted 2015-08-16 02:01 AM


Even sad memories can be turned into beautiful poetry.
                                   Ida

secondhanddreampoet
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9 posted 2015-08-16 10:50 AM


Hopefully so (turned into effective 'poetry' that is)

Thanks to each of you for commenting on this 'write!'

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10 posted 2015-08-16 05:03 PM


Bruce - We should all be so lucky to have such an emblem. This I liked. Namyh
secondhanddreampoet
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11 posted 2015-08-16 05:19 PM


Thank you !
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