Open Poetry #49 |
Taste the Night |
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
a huge moon lighting up the night can see the spiders’ web in the scrawny bush come then, ‘neath the tree I’ve a blanket and we are safe here you shall draw the thorn from its discontent O this lovely, lovely night you are my frankincense come, we are hidden even from the stars of the night kiss my parted lips draw from them my ponderous ache direct my mouth to your oh so ample bosom . . . oh waste not this night this so sensuous night savor me I will taste you together, tonight we shall find pleasures’ core ©June 23, 2015 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
You wax romantic my friend! I think we remain forever young in our minds. ~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yeah, you're right, Lori, forever romantic, that says so much . . . Thank you forever for dropping by and saying such nice things . . . ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
"come, we are hidden even from the stars of the night <~fav line kiss my parted lips draw from them my ponderous ache" ~Shakespeare has naught on you here, impressive bit o'sweet amour! Enjoyed your sensual homage to night & its never'waste.. best wishes Jerry ~T "..But a tyrant spell has bound me, |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ahhh, Tanya, I thank you sincerely! Finished my wine, now the nightly problem for finding my bed. Heh.Heh--Jerry ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
Oh how the taste of wine is making you wax eloquent and romantic..sleep tight don't let the bugs bite you, er the thorns on your bed of roses. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ah, jjote, many thanks for your astute comments . . . And yes, of course the wine will, and does, wax eloquent at times. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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