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self contemplation |
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Angela Hauser Junior Member Posts 17 |
I stand on black sands I stare into the abyss I see nothing to fear Something must be amiss I'm naked and torn My soul has been laid bare Alone, I walk Why are you not there? The words, they said You would be by my side Blasphemous! Those words, they lied... I walk alone With my deeds, with my thought... No one to answer to No indulgences to be bought Yet there is no fear I wrote my own tome I must face myself This judgment is my own |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Sometimes we must have a break with reality, I am going through much the same. Luck to you . . . ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
fine writing...james |
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Angela Hauser Junior Member Posts 17 |
Thank you both! And the same to you Jerry. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I appreciate the open interpretation you leave out for all here.. We are told of many salvations at our ends, yet I, too, have learned lately that we mostly walk alone. Powerful reflections you've writ, sweetie, wishing you the very best! ~d "..But a tyrant spell has bound me, And I cannot, cannot go.." ~Emily Bronte 'The Night is Darkening Around Me' |
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Angela Hauser Junior Member Posts 17 |
Thank you Davina. I walk a solitary path. I must one day face myself for my choices in this life and I must face them alone. No one, not even a devine being will be able to answer for me. Knowledge is power, but truth is even more powerful by far. I'd far rather enter the next realm with open eyes than in a sugar coated fog expecting to be magically forgiven for being an awful person. |
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