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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2015-07-16 09:35 PM



Train Track Boogie

when I was a young boy
our family lived in Japan
for about three years,
we traveled there by ship,
I was about 13 til fifteen;
when we first arrived we lived off base
for awhile waiting for on base housing,
the Japanese home we lived in had a
wonderful metal roof and each time
it rained it made quite a racket.
Just down the street was a train track
and when the train passed thru at night
you could hear the whistles and the place
would vibrate and make funny disturbed noises.
Me and my brothers had to explore where the
trains came from so on one summer afternoon
we walked the tracks, about a few miles North
there was a small stream with the train track
bridge passing over and from there we could see
the train coming from far away, we could feel
the train vibrations but not accurately guage
the speed of the trains, so we decided to walk
the bridge before the train and we figured
if a train showed up to fast we could run
a little and if absolutely necessary jump from
the bridge to the stream below, actually it
wasn't much of a stream, it was narrow and slow
flowing, and not so deep, we had noticed water
moccasans in the water, so it wasn't inviting
us in, still we had to walk that track to show
each other how daredevil we were, or was it
to show everyone how stupid we were,  in those
days we were called the Lee gang because there
were 6 children, a big family compared to most
and small compared to some.

JamesLee
7/16/15


  

    


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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
1 posted 2015-07-16 10:49 PM


No Heavenly Father, or related subject, James? (That was uncalled for!) It's fine walking those tracks, I guess most children have done the same at one time or another. I know I have.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (07-16-2015 11:21 PM).]

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
2 posted 2015-07-17 12:29 PM


I love these stories.As a young girl I lived on roller skates. The bridge use to turn out to let big boats go by.All the kids ran and jumped on the bridge to take the ride out over the water.I am sure I just skated on.Today that would be a big No NO LOL No one ever fell in.
thanks for your story.,o Perry

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2015-07-20 09:08 PM


thank you Jerry and Latearrival for reading and responding...james
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