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Kwb01003
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0 posted 2015-07-12 02:35 PM



Should we prefer the dawn or candlelight?

Alone and damp with dew
I sit and watch the shadows
retreat in the valley like a tablecloth
sliding from its setting
rows of trees revealing themselves
the woodgrain on our table for two
scratched and pocked from years of use
but charming
like the flicker in your eyes

they held me still even when our words floated down the stream
glistening now
abruptly
as the hillsides ignite

how rarely we get to see for miles in all directions

with only a hint of

fog on the glass of our favorite haunt
deserted and dark now between sittings
waiting to be retransformed with soft light and small talk

I wonder which of the two places is real?

I pull my face from the window
a scientist looking up from his microscope
to feel the first full sun

standing

I set off down a well worn path
dreaming of my favorite sunsets

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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2015-07-14 07:13 PM


nice writing...james
latearrival
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2 posted 2015-07-16 04:01 PM


Enjoyed Shadows in the twilight, beautiful setting and lovely thoughts. Jo Perry
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