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Angela Hauser
Junior Member
Posts 17

0 posted 2015-07-03 06:45 PM

I seek solace, my love
I find it in your arms
The perfect fit, just like a glove
Wrapped warm and free from any harm
Your tender touch, it warms my heart
And melts my frozen shell
It stays with me long after we part
And causes my heart to swell
I desire to be a part of your life
To bring you joy for all of my days
To give you an existence free from strife
Full of pleasure in every way
By your side we indulge the night
In your arms we hear the morning song
Every moment feels so right
With you there is no wrong
And so my heart is yours my love
And with it comes my soul
Within, without, below and above
I will gladly pay the toll

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2015-07-03 09:21 PM

This is just a fantastic poem of sensuous love and all that word implies! Great poetry . . .

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2015-07-06 12:43 PM

a perfect declaration of love; words are fantastic
have a nice day
yann

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2015-07-07 11:18 PM

nice writing...james

Fabiani
Member

since 2006-05-12

Posts 123
Mesa, Az

4 posted 2015-07-08 11:04 AM

Signed with silent née stillness

jjote
Senior Member

since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2015-07-10 11:43 PM

such a very deep and touching love poem.

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

6 posted 2015-07-13 03:04 PM

"By your side we indulge the night"
~fav line, perfect thought..

"Within, without, below and above
I will gladly pay the toll"
~anything worth keeping comes at cost, great end!

enjoyed your tale of heightened amour, Angela, ..be well poetess!
~d

"..But a tyrant spell has bound me,
And I cannot, cannot go.."
~Emily Bronte
'The Night is Darkening Around Me'

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

7 posted 2015-07-13 03:26 PM

Love at it's best, my friend ... well done.

j.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2015-07-15 05:19 PM

nice...and I really like the title...james

Mary Ann
Member

since 2003-04-23

Posts 111

9 posted 2015-09-23 07:26 AM

Beautiful!

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