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End of the Line |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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 potholes everywhere I’m to a point where I search for naught except legitimacy and truth nighttime, just before bedtime I become very still trying to recognize truth truth are you I am always disappointed when, I hear within my head first you must ask yourself how absolute are all of your lies ©June 23, 2015 / Jerry Pat Bolton |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
so we're now into posting photos with our poems - won't PIP disallow this if it eats up space? For your poem-- "first you must ask yourself how absolute are all if your lies" (just typo --of,not if). Yup, truth sometimes disappoint. ==================================== oops, you edited it before I could submit my post..hehe |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
"so we're now into posting photos with our poems - won't PIP disallow this if it eats up space?" I used to put photos on most of my poems, have never had any trouble with it. Thank you for coming into my world and giving me your thoughts . . . ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
nice writing....james |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks James. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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