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srizah
Junior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 34
India

0 posted 2015-06-29 02:20 PM



today I felt it again

the pain of the creator

the creator’s pain

sometimes I do wonder

why don’t I let it all

to evolution

Live Life!

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2015-06-29 04:43 PM


Leaving it all to evolution, I feel is the right thing to do. Of course I am in league with those who believe in reincarnation, srizah . . .

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2015-06-29 09:52 PM


nice writing...james
Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
3 posted 2015-06-30 09:00 AM


Often through pain we grow and become stronger, wiser and hopefully more tolerant. Pain is the nighttime to the daylight, be patient and shine on. ~L
jjote
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since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada
4 posted 2015-07-01 12:53 PM


To each his own pain though, but some have more than others. We're all comrades in pain, so take heart, you are not alone  
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