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Observing the Currents
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Observing the Currents |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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 go with your currents let them free you up Bayou Lafourche I sometimes sit on your bank observing your flow, your ever steady flow emptying finally into the Intercoastal Waterway at Larose eh . . . as I sit ‘neath a centuries’ old huge cypress tree being pestered by a busy bee I realize the acreage where I sit thousands of suns augmented by a changeable moon have come and gone as well . . . will my steps fade one day to be replaced forever more ©June 12, 2015 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (06-16-2015 11:04 AM).] |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Oh..super flecks! I love the pic Jerry! You be *temptin' the gators again, I seez  Very Poe-esque of you today hun..I like it! Sobering thought, that we all jus' get replaced in life's never ending current of footsteps. Enjoyed and be good! (as-if.. ya?) raize hellz if ye must- to smile..winx~T "..But a tyrant spell has bound me, |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Heh.Heh I'm not in the raising hell league anymore, Tanya, I'm more in the raising heck league. Thank yew for giving me one of your super fine comments this day. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Excellent work! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
really enjoyed the pondering...james |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, Karilea . . . ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Appreciate it James. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
Sadly, we have to accept that our footsteps will someday fade and be replaced by those who come after us. Love your photo, esp. the bottle with someone trapped inside (not you, I hope) just floating on top of the waves. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
No doubt acceptance of those coming behind us is a reality thing, and I do accept, jjote. Nope, that isn't me in that bottle, that is me, huffing and puffing, pushing the sea toward the shore . . . ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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