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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
What am I without you, a clock of more, forbidden of nudity. A wasted moment, a butterfly who lies to flowers. When I bend At the source of your lips, my weakness blooms... |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ahhh . . . Those wondrous lips, passionate and ribald all at the same time . . . ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Wud copy & paste the whole darn thing, Yann..this is *perfect romance!! "a clock of more" ~what an ache this brings. Powerful stuffs! be wellz ~d "..But a tyrant spell has bound me, |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thank jerrypat2 for reading and commenting, wondrous |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks devina, this is kind and i enjoyed reading you yann |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I'm back just in time for a walk in your garden, yann. Ida |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
So much more than just mere words, my friend. Very well written. j. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hi Ida, send you such many kisses from this garden, i am so glad to read you have a sweet day yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks jwesley, a very kind comment i appreciate a lot |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
How absolutely exquisitely beautiful, Yann! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
nice writing...james |
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