Open Poetry #49 |
If I should dream. |
whitbypoet1 Junior Member
since 2014-09-02
Posts 40 |
If I should fall, will you pick me back up And if I should thirst will you give me your cup, If the light slowly fades as the sun dies away Will you hold my hand tightly and ask me to stay Through the chapters of evening and on to the dawn While the clouds are still dressed in the style of forlorn, And if my eyes slowly close as I sit by the fire Will you grant me a page from the dreams of desire. If I should dream will you dream with me too Until all of our moments are finally through, I’ll stand on a bridge with the moon and the rain And the memories of night I will surely retain, If the shadows come closer and wrap around me How many sweet moments will we get to see, If I hold out my hand will you hold on so tight Then we’ll glow as a lantern and walk through the night. If I should awaken while you are asleep In a dream where the seas are so dark and so deep, I will reach down to you and bring you back to me To embellish the image of all we can be, And if I should fade please don’t wipe me away For I’ll come back again at the end of the day, Where a dream waits in silence for us to hide there Like a lantern lit prayer at the foot of the stair. If I can admit to the beauty of life whether silk over skin or cutting like a knife, It still calls out to me down the hallways of shade Like the rainbows that hide from the storms we have made, And if I seem to be caught with life’s tears in my eyes Looking through its elusive vermilion skies, It is only an illusion of one more dream scene That I’d wiped away once from somewhere I had been… |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ahhh . . . Beautifully rendered is this call to another in dreams, wanting, desiring compassion and understanding. Very good . . . ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Lovely write, a touching embrace painted in words. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Ah, great rhyming and great imagery within this piece. loved it. quote:I like that you don't have a predefined concept of beauty here. That in itself is a beautiful thing. Michael |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
enjoyed...james |
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