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Open Poetry #49

when thought suspends

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

0 posted 2015-05-17 08:10 AM

of something never written
without doctrine nor conception

this day of days
and yet without fanfare or expectation
comes the state of jubilation
from up when clouds went dormant, though
now recurring, unrehearsed

the wisps untraceable - yet we fly
on their white wings - seamless

as pink blossom insanity
that laid down color on lawn and byway
now flutters its butterfly

to be received by you, of me

this day undone
when boy meets girl

and thought suspends

[This message has been edited by EmmaRose (05-17-2015 08:57 AM).]

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2015-05-17 09:27 AM

Oh boy! Sounds to me that you have been smitten by optimism and and heart fluttering. If I read the meaning of this delightful poem, congratulation. I am happy for you.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

2 posted 2015-05-17 10:39 AM

Lovely thoughts Emma!

wishing you smiles for All-that-lies-Between in your jubilant expressions!

~d

"...But a tyrant spell has bound me,
And I cannot, cannot go...
~Emily Bronte
'The Night is Darkening Around Me'

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2015-06-03 08:55 PM

this is good writing...james

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