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Open Poetry #49

I fly

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2015-05-04 04:32 PM

To feel your touch,
leaves me with butterflies,
perhaps even a bit rhapsodic.

The delicate lust of your skin,
quietly embraces as it gently caresses mine.

All these ponderings,
that echo through the night.

Your heart beat next to mine,
a sweet lullaby serenading us among the stars.

Our stolen moments,
shuttering into photographs in memories.

I fly...
as the moon watches from above.
I fly... more.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2015-05-04 06:09 PM

Awesome reflections you have penned within this little beauty of a poem, Kellie . . .

This just says it all . . .

quote:
Our stolen moments,
shuttering into photographs in memories.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

2 posted 2015-05-04 06:24 PM

Love the nostalgic feel to this. I get the never wanting to come down part.

Michael

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

3 posted 2015-05-05 04:38 AM

I Fly is actually slang for I F-wording love you, but for artistic purposes, the idea of flying was just better.

AmyMichelle
Junior Member
Posts 21
Charlotte, NC

4 posted 2015-05-05 09:28 PM

Wow! So beautiful! This is just so lovely!

AmyMichelle
Junior Member
Posts 21
Charlotte, NC

5 posted 2015-05-05 09:35 PM

Excellent writing! Love the emotion behind this!!

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

6 posted 2015-05-05 10:32 PM

Now that's some great world-play, Kellie. I'm impressed.

Michael

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