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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2015-05-02 08:19 PM


If I knew why
knowing better
wasn’t enough for me
to choose
as I should have.
Then I would think
the road less traveled
would have
my footprints upon it.
Instead
I put my feet
peevishly perpendicular,
and stubbornly blaze
my own trail
independent of common sense.
At least that
is how it appears
from outside myself
looking in.
From the inside
trying to look out
it is a dilemma
of a different  color altogether.
Skews of logic and reason
toss about on tides of emotions.
Too often missing the boat
to catch the view
on a clear day
Lucky souls cannot relate,
and wonder,
why on earth...
Them that been there-
done that,
don’t point fingers…
They sadly nod their heads.
LGR(C)5/2/15


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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2015-05-02 08:32 PM


I'm sadly nodding my head.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2015-05-02 10:04 PM


eh...I thought as much. A couple of stubborn old goats! ~L
Michael
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3 posted 2015-05-02 10:07 PM


lol... I know I shouldn't be laughing here but I was nodding my head even before I got to the ending.  We do all blaze our own trails, though so few of them end in the glory so fearless adventures are deserving of.

Michael

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
4 posted 2015-05-02 10:31 PM


There are those (and I'm not one of them) that seem to have been born with a compass and they have known where they were going all their lives. Goals came easily to their minds. They always seemed to know exactly where their next step was going...
As for myself, I use the blunder and grope your way thru technique to navigate a trail~L

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2015-05-16 09:55 PM


enjoyed the thoughts...james
EmmaRose
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6 posted 2015-05-17 07:04 AM


I second your emotion
and relate, a mixed blessing
to be without a compass sometimes too I
surely believe

devina
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539
Cali
7 posted 2015-05-17 10:46 AM


You are certainly right about those that point...
I'm wondering...if a practiced fall might excite the stragglers?

Feel you sweetie!
and just where have ya been? stop bein' busy! ...unless it's really good? (we shall huddle laters)

take care Lori!
~d

"...But a tyrant spell has bound me,
And I cannot, cannot go...
~Emily Bronte
'The Night is Darkening Around Me'

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
8 posted 2015-05-21 08:38 PM


Compass?  What's that?  My nose has always chosen the direction and the rest of me, just as always, has foolishly followed. Damned if I do or don't - but Ce-la-vie, I'm still here and will follow whatever path it sniffs out!

Sniff, sniff - oh god, think I'll pass on that direction...

j.

jjote
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since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada
9 posted 2015-05-25 12:32 PM


I wake up each day not knowing where my steps will lead me..like wetting my finger raise it upwards, and wait for the wind to guide me where to go...that my compass ..life is getting shorter and I owe myself a few adventures before I sail my boat to the edge of the ocean..love this
2islander2
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by the sea
10 posted 2015-05-25 01:29 PM


hello lori, i guess our souls are imperfect, I love very much the questionning here, and have not answer for sure, thanks for the very subtle poem


yann

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