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Fevered Sleep
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Fevered Sleep |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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In my fevered sleep I dreamed pain warped dreams of you. Waking now, fever broken, thirsting for your touch, I reach for you. Be my dream now. Let your touch soothe me. Stroke away the lingering memories of that fevered sleep. LGR©4/21/15 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Would that who you were thirsting for came to you . . . ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
He did. Just holding my hand made tension release. I really felt awful. Feeling better today, just wiped out. ~L |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very nice, glad he arrived and let the tension release. true love never looks after it's own interests |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
It is crazy the things we dream when we are sick. And amazing the comfort of simple loving touch. ~L |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
well I must be continuously sick because my dreams are always "out there"... Hope this comment finds you feeling so-o much better, my friend. Enjoyed... j. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Jimmy, I am of the opinion that it is the creative ones among us that have the wackiest dreams and can remember them. I believe you fall into that group. ~L |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
so much harmony between the tittle and the poem, dreams are sometimes a part of a truth, thanks for the lovely reading yann |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Fever dreams can be so haunting. Glad you have someone to soothe you.  Michael |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
aww hun...leme know if you need tea...or a hot toddy perchance?  Glad you are feeling better, I'm currently trading a cold back-n-forth with my son... enjoyed! ~d Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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