Spring Song (long-form Zen poems #2)

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Spring Song (long-form Zen poems #2)

secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2015-04-11 10:38 PM

Spring Song

The best time for a poet is when spring is new
an evening like this is the finest of treasures
the scent of blossoms in the pale moon light
a lovely lady of mystery on an alabaster terrace
and soft Celtic music from some farther room

--- b. e. adams (4/11/2015)

ethome
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New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2015-04-12 08:25 AM

very nice word picture scene.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2015-04-12 09:15 AM

I think you have painted a perfect picture. your words filled my senses and I longed for the reality of such a place. The Celtic music from a farther room sealed my fate. ~L

secondhanddreampoet
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3 posted 2015-04-12 03:25 PM

thanks to each of you !

Marchmadness
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So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2015-04-18 01:52 AM

I would consider this a perfect dream of all that is beautiful.
Ida

secondhanddreampoet
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5 posted 2015-04-18 06:32 PM

thanks Ms. Ida, it was rather a 'perfect dream!'

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