A marriage built with love

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Open Poetry #49

A marriage built with love

J.J.thomas
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Posts 84

0 posted 2015-03-15 07:13 PM

This poem is going to be a gift for my parents 10th wedding aniversary.

It's more than just three words.
It's the years built by them.
It's a foundation.

For two people so in love.
For memories that last forever.
For then just the words.

The time.
The effort.
The patience.

Holding hands in Wal-mart.
Riding the motorcycle anywhere together.
Going hunting for Craigslist treasure.

Holding tight through any weather.
Being able to say it with out a word.
Unconditionally loving one another.

A marriage built with love
Not just words,but
So much more...

The time.
The effort.
The patience.

And so, so much more.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2015-03-15 07:17 PM

Very beautiful, J.J. Thomas. I think your parents will be proud of you and enjoy your most loving tribute.

Margherita

J.J.thomas
Member
Posts 84

2 posted 2015-03-15 08:38 PM

Thank you very much. I struggled with that last part for hours

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2015-03-15 08:53 PM

You couldn't have written this poem any better to show them your true feelings and how much they mean to you. They will love it!

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

J.J.thomas
Member
Posts 84

4 posted 2015-03-15 10:33 PM

Thank you jerry

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2015-04-02 08:51 PM

enjoyed...james

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2015-04-17 01:01 PM

I'm betting they loved this!!

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