Open Poetry #49 |
The Scent of You |
jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
The Scent of You The Scent of You Stole words from you, screamed them silently, whispered them just loud enough for you to hear between breaths; followed them with kisses to places led by hands of fire; breathed the scent of you . . . the scent of you . . .and me – in Love. © wesley james beard, jr. [This message has been edited by jwesley (03-09-2015 11:20 AM).] |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Love at it's steamy best... ~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Simple but oh so powerful, Jimmy. Yes indeed . . . ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
This is very Nicely expressed |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
jwesley - Sensual heat bathed in Love. The aroma gives you a smile you don't want to lose and the heat gives you a blister you don't mind keepin'. No poet could ask for a better reason to write. Much enjoyed this jw. Namyh |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
the inspiration for the poem is very much powerful in the thoughts turned to words |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
you surely do have a way with words love poetry is simply heart-pulling. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
nice...James |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Jimmy, I had to wipe the steam off my glasses. You write about love so danged well. A |
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