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Our Song |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London 
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~~~ A million souls in a dark abyss the only sound allowed is singing ~ One song each you sing one soul each you bring ~ You leave this game when you leave together ~~~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Wow Rex, this is rather deep and surreal. I like it. You left a lot of elbow room for interpretation here. I am particularly fond of you last stanza. ~L |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
tough task these days to find your soul mate |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Yes, people keep their souls deeply buried and covered with fertilizer.  ~L |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
the first stanza is so true, no place for sadness i guess, but it is easier when we are two, enjoyed yann |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
For some reason, I'm enjoying the chills... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
enjoyed...james |
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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
Succinct, but profound. Here's to your choir of souls. Let's leave together. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Thanks everyone... I've been enjoying my stay here this past month or so. I was able to write some new material and read some PIPs finest poets. Karilea... Careful you don't catch a chill |
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