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tracie66
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since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

0 posted 2015-03-06 04:30 AM

My soul she sings to the tunes of the suns warming rays
skips to the sweet melody the moon does cast
swept away by the overtures as my heart starts to sway
the mellifluous waves of light so vast

now my soul & heart begin to dance
taking to the floor that is my bodies essence
longing for the chance
to bask forever in the luminescence

content in the emergence of her spiritual elevation

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

1 posted 2015-03-06 06:13 AM

my soul's frozen solid at the moment, but when the spring thaw arrives, and the sun works its magic, I'll ask for a dance.

enjoyed
Rex

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

2 posted 2015-03-06 07:35 AM

....lol we have just started Autumn here so the days are still quite warm & sunny, Ive been on a months leave so I'm feeling refreshed, happy & relaxed. Amazing what a good dose of Vitamin D can do for you

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

3 posted 2015-03-06 11:57 AM

Beautiful and uplifting read. Wish my soul could tag along for a bit.

Michael

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2015-03-06 07:39 PM

very nice...james

Redstart
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since 2014-05-16

Posts 535

5 posted 2015-03-07 03:51 AM

Very good, another positively-charged poem.

jjote
Senior Member

since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

6 posted 2015-03-07 01:13 PM

" my heart starts to sway
the mellifluous waves of light so vast"

this is truly a soul dancing. Lovely imagery

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

7 posted 2015-03-07 08:27 PM

Thank you for bringing back feelings that feel long forgotten... Great Imagery! ~L

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

8 posted 2015-03-15 04:29 AM

thank you everyone for your comments, they are very much appreciated & I'm really glad you enjoyed.

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

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