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Afterglow |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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satin sheets stained with love’s after glow enthusiasm for love’s rhythm and shortness of breath trembling petals love’s payoff explored every nook and cranny exhausted but oh my I am so smitten ©March 1, 2015 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Sweet poem! Careful of those satin sheets, they can send you sliding to the floor...~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yeah, you're right about those satin sheets. I have a solution to that problem, just climb back upon them. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
looks like you're really smitten & having fun. go on back up bask some more in afterglow |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I hear ya, jjote, basking is our reward for a job well done. Thank you for being here. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
You are a sly hound, and that's a good thing  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you Emma, for calling me out as to who and what I am. Oh yes, I belong in the hounddawg class for sure, and I took it as a compliment. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I enjoyed this celebration of love. Well done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Many thanks Nan, I so appreciate your thoughts about my poem. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
does this work with flannel ? |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Heh.Heh This, my friend works with pine straw 'neath the tree that shed the straw. Oh yes. I recall that vividly. South Arkansas. Her name was Marionette. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I take it, she was the only woman who ever agreed with everything you said |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Don't know where you got that idea. She was horny. I was horny. We did it. End of story. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Oh, sorry... I just thought it a little strange, that her name was marionette |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
That completely eluded me when I read your comment. I apologize for snapping back atcha. Really, I should have "got" that. Her name was really Marionette and I wound up marrying her. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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