Open Poetry #49 |
A Time And Place |
Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Sketched upon my memory are those days we spent in Paris You said I was handsome I said beauty becomes you We danced to the buskers and filled their cups As you filled mine with love and your touch Holding you then even as I hold you now In dreams of what I always wanted to be rather than what I have become I would have loved you more my sweet if I could have loved anyone at all ...just bein' Bluesy |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
WoW! My kind of poetry. Relate? You betcha. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
..."I would have loved you more my sweet if I could have loved anyone at all" This is such a powerful truth! Enjoyed this very much Max! Lori |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
There is a bittersweetness about your poem..sounds like she missed out on a deep and true kind of love. Enjoyed ... |
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N_i_C_o_L_E Junior Member
since 2008-05-01
Posts 11North Carolina |
How's life been Bluesy? It's been quite some time! "In dreams of what I always wanted to be rather than what I have become" This screams out to me. So much depth in these two lines. Absolutely beautiful. |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Hi Nicole! Regardless of the years, it seems we're always bumping into each other. I hope all is well with you. By the way Nicole, you ever been to Paris? Warmest Regards from Bluesy ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Many thanks to Jerry, Lori and Blues for your kind responses. Always a pleasure to hear from you. ...just bein' Bluesy |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I think those last two lines fit into my life at some times...sadly...james |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Thanks for your visit James. Give my regards to all. ...BTS ...just bein' Bluesy |
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