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Mega Pixels |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London 
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Looking forward... Concentrating with one lonesome pixel recalling a smile stuck in a one pixel world Looking forward... I'll smile at your approach Share what's left thanking God you remember me Looking forward... dreaming about mega pixels ~~~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Let's never stop dreaming grand dreams! Your poem is quite captivating in its modern language/imagery.  Margherita |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Sounds life a dream made in Heave4n. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
That option of a mindful look into what we really saw... a pixel of light. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Unique and refreshing thoughts! Much enjoyed! ~L |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I like the spare form of this poem. Well done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
spare, a man of few words, but thought-provoking. I find myself reading it more than once, trying to go where your poem is trying to lead me. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Thanks for reading everyone. I guess I wrote it a little too vague... It's about memory loss as we grow older. I hope there is cure for Alzheimer's before I reach that crossroad |
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