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Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

0 posted 2015-02-28 10:17 AM

It was in the still where sound
conceived you

Under the reticent while
of whist

Both of my ears slowly
started
to paint you

Pushing down all of the
harm
on its knee

She was now heard and he
was now hymn

Locked in a union of choral and
limb

We were the classical cry
of the clamor

Living a silent sonata
in song

Birth on a ballad,
death
on a prayer

We saved the poetry
gasping
for air

She was the music and I
was the words

Play us and let all our
feelings,
be heard

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2015-02-28 12:06 PM

Omg the raw passion takes my breath away. I love your poetry Richy...

you wear your heart on your sleeve like none other my man.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2015-02-28 01:57 PM

THIS is one of the best, if not THE best poem of love I have ever read. Ya did good, Richy.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2015-02-28 02:56 PM

I am raptured by this symphony of love, dear Richy. So deeply inspiring!

You have your unique touch and I love to listen ...

Margherita

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

4 posted 2015-02-28 04:10 PM

thank you Bluesy, and thank you for all the inspiration over the years.. much more than you will probably ever know..

(((you're the best)))

<3

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

5 posted 2015-02-28 04:14 PM

Jerry my friend that was an extraordinary thing to say.. ill have to admit it caught me off guard for a moment and gave me a nice feeling

you humble me sir, thanks again

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

6 posted 2015-02-28 04:16 PM

and i love it when you're here dear Margherita.. one of my true blue bestest friends here forever..

thank you dearheart

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

7 posted 2015-02-28 06:02 PM

Soulful and romantic and the style is oh sooo unmistakably you! Your poetry goes very well with chocolate. ~L

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

8 posted 2015-03-02 09:29 AM

these are merely words without your superb
style in the crafting of the poem

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

9 posted 2015-03-05 05:32 PM

Thank you Lori... yes chocolate and poetry sounds like it would be, good together

Emma, that was very sweet of you to say.. that means a lot coming from you

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2015-03-11 10:04 PM

enjoyed...james

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

11 posted 2015-03-12 04:54 PM

Thanks James

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