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Open Poetry #49

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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

0 posted 2014-02-03 06:15 AM

The year of the snake
the lady falls.
The middle east explodes.
misfortune for all.
The New World strikes back
from a weakened position
when a savior appears
to lead with courage and vision.

Ida Werrett

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2014-02-03 07:56 AM

I sure hope you are correct about the last two lines. Poem hit home for me, Ida. Thank you.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2014-02-03 09:15 PM

Wow. Ida!

Lori

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2014-02-03 10:12 PM

I agree with Jerry . . . hopefully appearing on "our" side!

j.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2014-02-04 02:44 PM

some truth to consider , and great probabilities i guess,

thanks ida for the subtle poem

yann

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2014-02-04 04:50 PM

Hmmm...I would like to go in that direction...
You always make me think.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2014-02-09 05:42 PM

No doubt, dear Ida, qualities such as courage and vision are rare nowadays. May it happen!

Your eyes are sharp, as is your pen!

Peace.
Margherita

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

7 posted 2014-02-09 07:26 PM

interesting prediction... well done

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

8 posted 2014-02-15 03:31 AM

For some, there is an order of events in prophecy that distinctly harmonize with your poetry, with a great climax to be found in your last two lines.

Take heart.

...just bein' Bluesy

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2015-08-19 10:14 PM

nice writing...james

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