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valentine for lonely guy (ironic poem)
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valentine for lonely guy (ironic poem) |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
I have at all costs to write, turlututu It is the Valentine's Day, I don't want to be called an idiot, Nor trapped in the filter of a badly washed sieve To say that maybe I am the most imbecile lover You guess naturally the sound of this poem The beautiful one possesses lavish and plump forms, My love has starched sweetnesses, Kind crosswords in the cloakrooms of restaurants And legs which make the tour of a melancholic raclette Ah forgiveness, I did not tell it to you, I am in appetite today, I am in love crazy about a potato .. Is it necessary to be desesperated to love so much? |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, dear Yann, you are too cute. And yet there is that final sentence that unveils a deeper perspective. A beautiful potato may never know to be a substitute for a beautiful girl, but that's just what millions do without probably being aware of it. Raclette and potatoes is as good a medicine as any other means to get over the crazy festiveness of Valentine's day ...  You have written a very creative piece of poetry. Love, Margherita |
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