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The Whirled According To
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The Whirled According To |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050
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 The hues of humanity, so vary in vision A tumbling collide a scope trapped, In collision Nature cares nary, that we, are contrary She is the land lord We, merely rent Now we just, need to change nope into cope Grabbing for, hopefulness doesn’t mean grope Changing our tone from ignore into meant The rose of your eden is my favorite scent Being a, man means squashing our instincts The ones they call lewd and, animalistic Heavens to Betsy someone, is erotic Now be a good boy, and just be psychotic My scope has forever been freshness of breadth The end of beginning and, dawning of death Reason is weapon as well as is gain We are the crazy that settled in, sane We are an action, without any reason Blocking the forest, for all of its treason We are a hiccup that’s only half full The sky is releasing the rope, that we pull A sliver, of whispers peeled, from the sea Wetting the lips of both you and me Making my mind just spin, into swirls I guess that is why I call her, my whirled |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Richy~ This was delightful. Reading each stanza was like watching a butterfly flit from flower to flower. Your sense of whimsy is as keen as your sense of humor. Lori  |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Lori, what a kind thing to say.. I'm glad you're here we are all the better by your spirit |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
enjoyed the play on words ... read with a smile |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
thank you Rex |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Richy,I have to just say "Ditto to Lori." She expressed my feelings much better than I would. Joy to you. Jo |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
thank you jo.. i appreciate it.. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You write so nice, love the play on words but even more, your sentiment and style. You're all heart Richy!! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
thank you Lori.. its always special when you come by and visit.. |
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