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SPOT-due to the sunspot inspire-but silliness abides
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SPOT-due to the sunspot inspire-but silliness abides |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
SPOT a spot of sun, a spot of tea a spot of rain, a spot of grain a spot of grime to fit my rhyme a spot of glue upon my shoe it gives a clue of what to do a spot of mustard upon my custard makes me cringe, but then I think it just may help that noxious stuff contrast the egginess by adding tanginess make it savory in its flavory so don’t you knock it until you’ve tried it you may find a change of mind no longer bent to shout, “Blasted spot, get out!” apologies to Shakespeare ©Virginia Salter February 1, 2014 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Heh.Heh You certainly gave my "Sunspot" a viable run for its money, Virginia. I just knew you were going to say "Out damned Spot, I say out!" at the end, but you did it your way and THAT was the best way. Shakespeare is somewhere grinning. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thanks, JP, glad you got a smile and though you had a close expectation, I'm happy I tweaked it just enough. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very cute --- and the comments also!!! j. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
VAS- What great fun! Silliness is my favorite flavor! Lori  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your humoristic vein is quite entertaining, dear Virginia. You gave your pen the freedom to rock. Margherita |
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