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Yet Another Poem of my Love
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Yet Another Poem of my Love |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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thinking about you the mark of love is on my heart gold like the moon in certain phases it devours me smearing me with its quintessence soothing even as it excites me I revel in the honey-sweet of your face that smile which has launched so many smiles I sincerely add mine you make me dream in color you lay so tenderly upon my heart you. I. love. ©January 24, 2015 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
So passionate!! You're looking good with your heart on your sleeve. Very sweet poem JP... |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Very touching! What a wonderful poem to give to your lady love. Kat >^..^< |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you so much Kat, your thoughts are appreciated. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Sweet response to my poem, Blues, thank you. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
My friend, I'm still telling you, love looks good on you!~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you Lori, you are sweet this morning. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
O I know the dream of color she comes in colors everywhere she combs her hair shes like a rainbowwwwwwwwww.  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hah! Emma. You got carried away there . . . Heh.Heh Thanks . . . ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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changingtides81 New Member Posts 6 NC, USA |
This is very touching! I am a total romantic at heart and I can feel your love expressed in this poem so clearly. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, changingtides81, I appreciate your thoughts. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
wow! so so incredibly breathtaking! love this piece! xx Love is the life of the soul... |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Tracie. Thank you, you really know how to make a guy break out with a smile. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
this is nice...james |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you James. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Sweet and savory |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks Kathleen, I appreciate your kindness. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
I sing "love is in the air", or is it because this is February, the love month. You've got me infected, so I'm posting my smile too. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you jjotem, for stopping by to read and comment on my poetry. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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