Open Poetry #49 |
A Moment of Peace |
secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
A Moment of Peace Silent, soft, and slow falls the gentle snow, from Gaia’s Winter cloak of boundless clouds, to mask all follies and schemes of men in a cotton-white mantle of finest dreams and assuage the saddened mind, broken heart, and troubled soul as Time stands still in this moment of blissful peace --- b. e. adams 1/21/2015 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Exquisite, dear Bruce. You are so right! Snowfall can become almost hypnotic and it can guide us to experience great inner peace. Margherita |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Perfect, Bruce. Ida |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
perfect moment of serenity in front of nature, very fine penning yann |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
thanks for your nice comments Margherita, Ida, and Yann ! |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
I could see the falling of the snow as I read this. Slowly covering everything in white, softening the landscape and how it can deliver us to a place of peace. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thank you for the lovely comment, Marilyn ! Snow certainly softens harsh reality in the moment. |
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MissMarti Member Posts 87 USA |
In my mind, there is nothing more peaceful than watching falling snow. A beautiful write. Thank you for the moment of peace! Maybe if it snowed in places like Syria, Afghanistan and other mid-east countries where there is conflict, we could have peace!! ❤️ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thank you, "MissMarti" ... welcome to the fine blue sands of 'P.I.P.-land' by the cyber-sea! |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Enjoyed!! Kat >^..^< |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thank you, Kat ! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
brilliant! Love is the life of the soul... |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
thank you ... glad you liked this 'write!' |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
enjoyed...james |
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