Open Poetry #49 |
being two |
2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Be two It is to invent the world, It is to offer the hand In the white dove So that she carries the peace, Be two It is to learn to dance In the wild grass, To pick flowers Which have no existence, It is to leave the water Understand the river And drink the heart, Be two, It is to learn to count, To add the moon and the earth, It is to look at the sky So that it understands us Be two It is to give a sense to bees And know how to soften the verb To embellish the life .. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
This is a strong poem and with deep meanings. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Definitely two - though not as unique as one, but two, that's 1 and 1 enhanced. enjoyed, j. |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
Enjoyed your poem! Beautifully written and thoughtful! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks Jerry for your supportive comment, yes it is strong being two have a nice day yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks jwesley, may be two don't exist, isn't it alaways one plus one, nice reflexion indeed, have a nice day yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks gale for the kind words have a nice day yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Another mesmerizing poetic offering from you, dear Yann. It's what happens when two inspire each other and exist more fully and more in harmony with All There Is. Before experiencing the "One" there must be "Two". Fantastic. Margherita |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Yann- This is exceptional! Lori |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks a lot Margherita for the extremely beautiful comment, it is honoring and so kind of you, may be you could read the french version on a french site called "oasis des artistes", if you have time, thanks for the very enjoyable answer have a nice day yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks lori for the kind and precious comment have a nice day yann |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Definitely one of your best, yann. ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Elle est merveilleuse la version française originale, cher Yann. J'ai eu grand plaisir et joie de la lire. Mais en tous cas aussi en anglais l'effet est surprenant! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
merci Margherita, je suis complimenté par ton avis, car j'étais un peu dans le doute, merci yann |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
very nice...James |
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