Open Poetry #49 |
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Promise? |
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Grouse Junior Member Posts 10 |
Promise? The word asks softly suggesting need for something more than the reliability of a day to day forecast. Weather is iffy. Grouse |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome Home!!! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Well, I've hardly been around here for a number of years, when I used to be incessant. I didn't know you'd been gone, but it does seem like I've heard grouse have become endangered, so I guess, especially, it's good you're back. A pointed piece in an ethereal way. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Grouse, I love your name! It makes me wonder what I've been missing! Enjoyed this poem very much and I'm looking forward to more. ![]() |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Grouse I have been here since almost the beginning.But I do not remember you ,so Welcome back. Jo Perry/"late" |
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Grouse Junior Member Posts 10 |
Thank you, All. I was previously RMW but lost my password and what with a change of email could not figure out how to return. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Back in the faded depths of my mind, I seem to remember both tags, but, my minds faded depths are really faded these days . . . either way ... HEY YOU!! j. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
So much meaning and truth... In so few words. Mmmm yea. Pure poetry...it's good to read you again. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi thereā¦.nice to read you. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Enjoyed. Welcome back. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Enjoyed this short and to the point prose.Jo |
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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
You had me repeating to myself 'Promise?', in that soft needy way. This is succinct , but works perfectly. |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
Been away for long too. Love short poems which say so much in so few words. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Nice little gem! Margherita ![]() "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
fantastic! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I'll add my expression of liking your poem very much . . . A heartfelt meaning within the lines. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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