Open Poetry #49 |
open the window from time to time |
2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
To observe the sea is a beautiful play for the mind,it imposes the reassurance, forces the look in the invisible details, the enumeration of odd Rocks, the height of breakers, The taste of the foam, little common parameters lead you to forget the speed where everyone waste the essential, to see the sea open any sorts of windows in my soul … |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
If I lived by the ocean I would certainly open the window, yann. Actually we are about 30 miles from the ocean here. Ida |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I was born in a land locked place, and it was strange when I found myself working offshore in the Gulf of Mexico for so many years. I learned to like and respect the sea for what it was. ~*~ When politicians give up on liberty, it falls to poets to preserve it. Or write its epitaph. ~*~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Sailed on it for a couple years - aircraft carrier: lived in the middle of it - Guam: almost drowned in it a couple of times: swam and fished it it more times than I can count - the Pacific anyway: and have always felt the pull of it's tides in my blood. Awesome place - The Sea, The Sea, The Salty Sea Guide me to an ocean, cleanse my feet with salty spray, hold me back from the sirens call, enticing me to join her, this foam-flecked day Guide me to an ocean with waters of deepest blue, on dolphin backs I'll skim the waves, till the sunlit sky fades . . . and turns its darkest hue. Guide me to an ocean lay my bones at the bottom of the sea, sail with me on a ship of souls, skimming the bottom restlessly. The sea, the sea, the salty sea, the only home for me. © wesley james beard, jr. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Exquisitely expressed, dear Yann. Profoundly beautiful. The sea is perfect for introspection and it always inspires, also to see beyond the horizon. I also loved Jimmy's contribution. Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello ida, it is not so far for a trip or two in the month, I guess, the sea realy chnges the soul and Worth the trip, thanks for the comment yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks Jerry,the anecdote is meaningful, and enlinghtning yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks jwesley, your poem is beautiful and deep, i mean it express passion and love for the ocean, i understand your various sentiments for the ocean with sympathy, yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks Margherita, your words mived me with poetry and emotion, i am glad you loved the poem (in prose) yann |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Both your title and your message have a calming effect. Lovely thoughts islander, and so true to your namesake. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
well said indeed ! There is always grandest magic and mystery in the boundless sea ... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Yann, this is so beautifully open souled writing I thoroughly enjoyed. What a beautiful powerful creature the sea! Love it! Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
very nice...james |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks blue serenade, o try to fo that sometimes for protecting my soul, nice comment indeed yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks secondhanddreamer, for reading yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks ethome for appreciating my look of the sea, something philosophical and necessary for me, have a nice day yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks james for reading yann |
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