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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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 life has taught me one thing doesn't always have to be poetry flowers and beauty no . . . it can be lonely highway as thousands of cars pass you and you weary thumb by it can be dark alleys street hustlers always trying to up you one the insincerity of the woman you score or was that my insecurities at play life can offset that grimy, desolate and very bad life by taking notice of a beautiful woman's smile allowing people to go ahead of you in the check out line if they only have a few items if it rains find a secluded place take all your clothes off and feel your life so when you look back on it you feel the inner glow of knowing you did the best you could at all times ©November 22, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton If they give you ruled paper write sideways. [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (11-24-2014 12:32 AM).] |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Will this site ever become what it used to be? I keep trying, but . . . If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
No Jerry, this site, like us and all things will never be what it used to be. It is what it is. It has moved to the future with a life of its own. Thank God for you or the blue room wouldn't be different every day. You are the blue stalwart. Yes, you try and you do us a great service. On behalf of all of us here, I offer you a heartfelt thank you! Do not be discouraged, but instead take pride in the great job you do each and every day! I know I look forward to seeing your name everyday.  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Lori, thank you, somehow I feel I don't deserve these words, but am so happy to read them. If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Yes..nothing stays the same so we accept the things we can not change. But there are things we can change...and a kind word/deed speaks volumes. You breathe life into these blue pages JP. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you Blues, I so appreciate your kind words. If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
JP2, "so when you look back on it you feel the inner glow of knowing you did the best you could at all times" How else could it ever be? You did an outstanding job with one, bud. Thought provoking for sure!! Enjoy the mood your write just placed me in... Excellent. JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
If my words put you in a good place, then they worked like they were supposed to. Thanks, JL. If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
if it rains find a secluded place take all your clothes off and feel your life so when you look back on it you feel the inner glow of knowing you did the best you could at all times And isn't that just a fantastic conclusion? This is powerful, dear Jerry. Margherita |
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