JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
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2014-11-18
08:38 PM
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I stared through the window at all the nonsense called antique my eye caught the unicorn embroidered on lusty silver silk the store was one I hadn't noticed before traffic behind me was voraciously loud sunbeam rays collected dust I stared at the unicorn it was a defiant stag embroidered in golden threads by her arthritic fingers oh so many, many years ago
©November 16, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton
If they give you ruled paper write sideways.
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Jerry Pat Bolton
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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
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2014-11-18
10:34 PM
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Moving images here Jerry!
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JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
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2014-11-18
10:37 PM
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Right. Thanks.If they give you ruled paper write sideways.
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secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
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2014-11-19
01:43 PM
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fine nostalgic 'slice-of-life' write and great visual imagery !
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JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
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2014-11-19
01:44 PM
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Thanks Bruce. I'll get to your poem soon, I'm very swamped right now.If they give you ruled paper write sideways.
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