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Open Poetry #49

Mornings of remember

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

0 posted 2014-11-15 08:06 AM

The culprits of time
and its wind song
stack high the first rush of last Spring
colors of credence
that gave definition

legends of pinks and vanillas
morphing fast beyond the bridge
to lost love and dead letters

with barely a brush stroke
of them, and of us, in the landscape

only the overage
of seasonal browns
laying down hauntingly
on autumn paths
on this morning of remember

[This message has been edited by EmmaRose (11-16-2014 02:56 PM).]

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2014-11-15 08:22 AM

Oh, I do so enjoy your way with words!!! I love the pictures you paint!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2014-11-15 08:39 AM

I most definitely concur with Lori, your way with words is a marvelous thing, Emma.

If they give you ruled paper write sideways.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2014-11-15 10:10 AM

this is full of colors and delicate, enjoyed it

yann

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2014-11-15 11:06 AM

Hauntingly beautiful in its melancholy, dear EmmaRose.

Love,
Margherita

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

5 posted 2014-11-15 05:39 PM

'colorful' write indeed ... fine imagery.

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

6 posted 2014-11-16 07:40 AM

thanks for much for reading me
I appreciate it always
EmmaRose

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

7 posted 2014-11-16 09:41 AM

Exquisite, EmmaRose. You always get to the bones of the matter, but you always paint bones with the magical brush of dreams.

Owl

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2014-12-04 05:26 PM

You are truly a delight to read. Your poetry is so soft and whispy.
Each word seems to cascade down the page with such a delicate flutter.

Pretty pretty poetry...

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