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Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2014-11-12 12:00 PM

Winter Lust

When did the coldness steal the star light
Before I mourned the loss of summer?

Even the day is as cold as night

When light refracts across the horizon
The snow becomes brighter than sunlight

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2014-11-12 09:38 AM

My thoughts on the seasons, I think we should only have autumn and spring, really. I hate summer. I hate winter. Guess I need to move to San Diego. I think their mean temperature is in the upper seventies.

If they give you ruled paper write sideways.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2014-11-13 10:56 PM

Oooooh so pretty...even the chill is like warm breath in the mist of it all.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2014-11-16 01:19 AM

i like when snow is everwhere around during few days, the poem share the delicacy of landscape then and souls follow, but cold keep cold alas

yann

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2014-11-16 08:45 AM

Yes! You really captured it for me here! I am miserable in the heat so the cold I can deal with. (ice is Satan's spawn) But you can not compare the crystalline beauty of the season with any other, it stands alone.

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

5 posted 2014-11-16 12:51 PM

Juju, beautifully expressed. Enjoyed,

Very expressive thoughts Jo

HeliaHeart
Member

since 2008-11-16

Posts 53
Georgia

6 posted 2014-11-20 04:24 PM

Beautifully thought provoking, it makes me a little more willing to deal with the current snow storms

~Lia
"Live as if you were to die tomorrow, Learn as if you were to live forever"
-M. K. Ghandi

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2014-11-22 04:10 AM

quote:
When light refracts across the horizon
The snow becomes brighter than sunlight

So true! I highly enjoyed your beautiful "Winter Lust", it makes me long for white covered landscapes ...

Love,
Margherita

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

8 posted 2014-11-26 01:40 PM

Did I really miss (almost anyway) this. What a shame that would have been ...

loved it, my friend.

jimmy

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

9 posted 2014-12-14 01:13 PM

Winter can be miserable but such a beautiful miserable. Such a lovely poem.
Ida

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