Open Poetry #49 |
Looking Out a Window |
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
a man standing, looking out a window he does that a lot looks past the thorny rose beautiful, but easy to leaking blood stab and misery the thorns attack him everywhere he looks past the thorny rose to the people who awoke this day whole by evening time their life has been changed forever gunshot, car wreck, things happen to us so this man stands looking out the window brow furrowed outside his contemplation his thoughts rambling without baggage his heart has short-circuited boulders have closed around it this man keeps looking out the window with bars ©November 6, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Jerry, Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Awww . . . Thanks for the hug, Lori. If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
a lot of lonely window watchers out there, you speak eloquently and truthfully for many |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yeah, you betcha, Emma, there are many who are staring balefully out some window, for real, or in their minds. Thank you for being here . . . If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Great writing! Kat >^..^< |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks Kat, I appreciate it. If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
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