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A Part of Whole
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A Part of Whole |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050
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 It takes me five seconds to write, “I don’t know” It took me a lifetime to truly, understand it It’s taken me even longer to be sure of myself Well that one actually I’m still, kind of working on I really enjoy it when your words are blushing It so becomes you and then becomes me There just isn’t enough of that particular shade At least not the way your emotion makes it Your lips are like the covers of my memoirs a daily diary of faith and feelings Always glistening and wanting for more They are the portal to artistry and fascination The key to open them is a gentle kiss and then they slowly open on their own Some of my pieces are deeper than others I've written but that’s where it comes from inside of this center Sometimes I feel like a giant, walking on the shore A galaxy of comets underneath each step Warping time with each and every stride Writing a story in a language of footprint A tale for the wind, to read and erase I keep looking back to only see one side of the saga It’s hard to understand enchantment when every other word, is missing Being a part, can be very special A part of something, or somebody You are that piece that nurses on breath Bringing the best out of someone who’s not You are that element that makes my eyes stare off to the distance, where both of us, still share Being a part, of something whole Is more than one should ever, ask for [This message has been edited by Richy (01-26-2014 04:40 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Spectacular write, dear Richy. Indeed, separation is an illusion. You rendered this awareness masterfully. I loved every piece, every word that form the whole of this poem. And the picture speaks for itself beautifully. Going to read it again! Margherita |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yep. Being a part. Even loners like me longs to finds himself being part of a part. Sometimes, however being part of a part doesn't always work out too good. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
Sometimes I feel like a giant, walking on the shore A galaxy of comets underneath each step ************************************** I like the tospsy turvy way you look at the world, which actually produces sense to the reader |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
An absolutely delightful Story. Sometimes just the thought of being one of two is enough but it can not replace the true feeling of being one together. Best to you you Richy , jo |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Some deep thought and emotion woven into this one. A truly enjoyable read. Michael |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You are that element that makes my eyes stare off to the distance, where both of us, still share -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Says it all.... |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thank you Margy – you’re the best  Yes, not always Jerry… reminds me of the saying, “Bad breath is better than no breath” Thanks for leaving a reply Yes, topsy turvy for sure Emma.. I think im kind of an, acquired taste haha Being, one together! I love that Jo Michael, I thank you friend Yes Lori, I think so too.. |
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