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Night's Façade
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Night's Façade |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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tired old Sol yawns into twilight mist collect as dark night takes hold along the bayou whoo-whoo wise owls looking for quarry talons penetrate weak scream from its victim gator's hiss food on its mind also the bayou's nocturne with full orchestration refreshed old Sol waits until everything is in place before appearing again or is everything a façade covering our fragile weaknesses' in a protective cocoon sometimes that cocoon gives way to a weeping heart when it learns it's all over ©October 21, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton If they give you ruled paper write sideways. [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (10-26-2014 01:45 PM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The idea of a weeping heart is a fragile thing indeed. Loved your bayou visuals Jp. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Much appreciated, Lori, and thank you too. If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
I enjoyed both the setting and the content much mesmerized here |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, Emma, I much appreciate you kind comments. Thank you. If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
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