Open Poetry #49 |
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Beyond the Clouds |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! ![]() |
Beyond the Clouds Dance beneath a crystalline sky of tremulous stars as a grand night moon rides the high-twilight wind across a thousand miles of Autumn passing through mountains of immortal Time Protect the purity of your search for ‘truth;’ and be as this silver river flowing ever steadfastly toward the glittering sea of your finest dreams with Love as your one true compass. Let your lithesome spirit-heart roam beyond the clouds a lifetime long. --- b. e. adams (10/21/2014) |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
Very nice to read before going to sleep and then fly in your dreams ) |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thank you !! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your poetry is not only beautiful, it is wise. Nice writing dp. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I have walked my chosen Zen Tao (path of 'enlightenment') for a very long time. I believe the hardest task for any of us is likely doing the difficult work of introspection and inner transformation into 'who' and 'how' we really want to 'be.' Hopefully, wisdom is garnered via that 'inner journey' and by careful observation, respect, and appreciation of/for all others and everything around us. Thank you for your most kind comment on this ever-so-humble lil' 'poetic scribble!' |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I think your poetry shows that you are doing very well on your Zen path, Bruce. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
thanks ... I hope so ! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Lovely, Bruce! Owl |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thank you again, Ms. D. (especially coming from a writer of your talent it means a lot indeed !) |
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