Open Poetry #49 |
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miscellaneous snippets of Winter Zen |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! ![]() |
Winter Zen more lonely than ever ___ Winter darkens Winter twilight___ even two shadows spooning dawn in the pines___ listening to the voices of wilderness dancing eyes only___ Black cat at midnight never so cold___ voice of the Winter wind Long-shadows dance in the setting sunlight___ candles beckon do snails sleep? ___ a thousand unanswered questions beautiful lady smiles___ icicles sparkling by moonlight falling snow thundering silence___ a moment of tranquility sunset … moonset four billion years of ‘Deep-Time’ what is another day? Winter river ice-flows and emptiness bird tracks in the snow the North wind calls snowflakes to dance filling the corners of this Winter world no more than dewdrops on the grass we face life’s storms from all directions Deep-Winter sorrows___ in an ice-clutched world a relentless Winter wind rules a thousand miles of desolation___ striking the bottom of loneliness --- b. e. adams (1/25/2014) [This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (01-25-2014 08:13 PM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You take the chill off of winter and warm the soul. Very nice writing~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I will save this gem, my friend. I absolutely loved this . . . quote: This is no doubt in my mind, for me, one of your very best. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Nicely done, enjoyed! Kat >^..^< |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I feel a chill with this one, Bruce but then it's beauty bring a certain warmth and joy. Ida |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
this did bring the warmth despite the chill.. seasonally soul satisfying |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Exquisite snapshots, I love the redeeming quality of the 2nd after the 1st. Rekindling juxtaposition. Thanks for posting. I'd like to put that on my wall to be sure it's memory wouldn't be confused with "my own thought," thinking it had been my own serendipitous illumination. What I mean is: to be certain who its author is, it's originator. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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