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Open Poetry #49
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luminosity
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since 2005-11-18
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0 posted 2014-10-07 12:14 PM

fleeing, as if a predator I might be
thoughts scurry into hiding
choosing even badly lit places
over being caught
and paper pinned

shall I coax,
construe fangs and claws
as painted pretense,
sanity's defense?
sweet-talk them out of hiding
will they believe?
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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2014-10-07 02:54 PM

Ahhh . . . I have a feeling you could sweet talk most anyone from wherever they might be hiding.

If they give you ruled paper write sideways.
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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2 posted 2014-10-11 12:14 PM

I would say you have pinned them well, dear Luminosity! So good to read you again. This is not rambling, it is poesy.

Love,
Margherita
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