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Open Poetry #49

Window Pain (Pane)

KAM39
Junior Member
Posts 26

0 posted 2014-09-26 11:03 AM

Heart tries to deny what the eyes can see

peeking in,Can't believe it could be

ten waisted years lay there in the bed

The caressing motions bring a deeper color of RED

A sickness, twisted in knots as the door is kicked in

Man full of rage, ungodly thoughts of sin

At least i have the dignity to not do it in our home

thinking of his mistress as he reaches for his gun

Jerking back the covers with death at the door

Mommy and baby playing a tickle war

At a loss for words, his heart filled with shame

Realizing he saw his own reflection in the window pain

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2014-09-27 12:32 PM

This is very dark and it hurts. When people act in a raptus, soon afterwards they realize the gravity of their action, but there is no way to mend and they will have to live with their own despair. You rendered this situation very efficiently.

Margherita

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