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An Appearance of Dawn
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An Appearance of Dawn |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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an appearance of dawn motionlessness the heavens seem to be mocking my over-indulgent fantasy about existence, demise, sleep are the previous monotonous resonance of old unchanging thoughts my inner self harmonious with yours we are two spirits if you believe in spirits we are the endless flourishing entities within our boundaries so, here I sit looking out my window as the sun creeps into view wondering if spirits can break down barriers and speak with one another can touch "Touch?" and feel the pulsating pounding of two hearts as one ©Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (09-24-2014 09:57 AM).] |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
JP-I think that somewhere in our sleep we go a visiting hither and yon (no pun intended) as our spirit calls us to do. Lori  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I couldn't disprove your statement, nor would I want to, Lori. I say let the spirits wander and collate what they have found and maybe back to me bits and pieces of the wandering. Thank you. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
They can, Jerry! And I like your poem |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ahhh . . . That is wonderful that you believe the spirits can communicate, Gale. I digging into reincarnation pretty heavily these days and in face I'm writing a novel about it. Thank you. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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