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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia 
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. Summer, sunlight, warm and calm Berries in the grass All the world is in my palm Specially for us On the surface of the lake Covered with a mist Neither doubt nor mistake Ever could exist Someone earns his daily bread Being taught by God Somewhere people, going mad, Shed their brothers’ blood As for me I take a chance Spend my idle day Staring high to catch your glance Listening if you say There’s no matter for complaint One may spend and spare I can be a holy saint I can trade in shares I can paint my life in verse I can break or mend All is senseless just because Nought is in the end Have no power to forget What I am and seem Like an asymptote of that Which I call my dream As if looking through the lens At the changing shape: Winter, darkness, iron fence Nowhere to escape . 27/07/2014 . |
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whitbypoet1 Junior Member
since 2014-09-02
Posts 40 |
Hello Galina, this is quite lovely writing, I shall read more of your work soon, and hope to be a friend in poetry also...Keith. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Seems you have a poetical admirer. Can't hardly blame him, you write exquisitely . . . ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
Thank you, Keith ) Nice to meet you! And I'm glad that you liked my poem ) |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
Jerry, you're kidding  Thank you for reading and for the feedback! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: That's a truly highly significant poem, dear Galina. Most beautifully written and profound, a mirror of your soul. In the apparently "idle" silence, when we just listen, there can be found channels that bring enlightenment. Beautiful! Love, Margherita |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
Thank you, Margherita, for reading and for the nice comment! I wrote this piece in July on my vacation which I spent by the forest lake, and it was quiet and peaceful time of my intense summer life ) |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
So many layers and undercurrents and so much to like. Your visuals are wonderfully expressive... Excellent poem on so many levels. Really nice writing Gale... |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
I'm glad that you liked it, BluesSerenade. Thank you for reading and commenting! |
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