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Open Poetry #49
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KAM39
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0 posted 2014-09-22 10:08 AM


Feet dangling over a gentle stream of ancient tears
exhaling clouds, memories of when you were here

a thought of your smile warm like the sun
a chill up my spine that reminds me your gone

emotions sway back and forth, littering the sky with wants and needs
yet calmly, they find a place to concede

drop by drop, the memories drift further
but only to share what will last forever.

bound towards the sea,cherished time that we've shared
spilling my broken heart into a gentle stream of ancient tears.
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Margherita
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1 posted 2014-09-23 10:55 AM

Very lovely and softly melancholic, yet exuding gratitude for what has been.

I enjoyed reading your poem.

Margherita
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